Minor edits:
this sentence again:
swimmers on the lake to where strobe lights
swimmers on the lake to wear strobe lights
AND
(4) Adopting the proposed rule would have not be practical from an enforcement standpoint
Should probably read:
(4) Adopting the proposed rule would not be practical from an enforcement standpoint
Since this letter says "We" all throughout, what's the best way to send it as a solo person, I guess I can edit it and just say "I" everywhere.
There were also a few "effect" vs "affect".
How did the meeting go? Anyone know?
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Last edited by Rich; 06-20-2016 at 01:30 PM.
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